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[Experimental] TALK
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<URL url="https://soundcloud.com/mutant_christ/talkdemo2">https://soundcloud.com/mutant_christ/talkdemo2</URL>
This is called Talk, or "Talk to Me". It's got a 90 second intro, with ethereal harmonies. I have messed around with electronic many times before, but the tone and structuring of this is odd. To this day I don't even really know if I legit like it. There is actual guitar in it, but the atmosphere lies in the synth and vocals. I don't really have any specific questions, I guess just let me know what you think. If you have any ideas though on how I can improve it that would be rad. Is there a different genre you think fits better with this track?

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Shoot it up x(a lot of times for like 90 seconds,)

Help me, I'm in chains
Things just aren't the same,
Take your shelter now.

Notice my absence,
feel the ambiance
while the scum take over.

Dragons made me dance,
with all the birds and the plants
I know that time is limited

As the black sun fades,
we're all human waste
Why has our God forsaken us?

If I live with dust par-ti-cles so what? They're my friends
What did you want, of me - enough
Of me, yeah

Talk to me.
Talk to me.
TALK TO ME.
TALK TO ME!

Murder, murder --
Come on baby come and talk to me
Talk to me, talk to me
Come on baby won't you talk to me?
Talk, don't talk to me
Fucking talk to me!
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#2
I like this trippy feeling,
I haven't been high in a long time, but this is quite theraputic
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#3
Great track, it did definitely sent me on some kind of journey.
If I'm going to pick on something I really like the shift in tone at 3:40, but it is gone as soon as it is introduced, leaving the listener a little.. How do I describe it? Blue balled?

Overall, really good and professional sounding track.
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#4
kinda sounds like a more experimental mac demarco ahah. Really like the drum break at 0:44 , caught me by surprise a little. Vocals are super well done too.

I think within the 4 minutes of the track you could cut it down into a song that makes more 'sense', but imo that would ruin the creativeness and sheer journey that the track takes you on Smile
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