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[Lo-Fi] Trying make some sh*t xD
#1
Hey, I made this: <URL url="https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/816985">https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/816985</URL>
It's some "Lo-Fi" Experience what I tried...
So, I just want to know, if this is done Well Wink. Let me know... please
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#2
this is really good! The only thing i could say about it is that the drums are too "out there," as in theyre too snappy and high in frequency, which takes away from the lofi sound. some EQ and reverb and delay should help!
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#3
Oh, I noticed it... But I was thinking it's good. So, yeah. I try something in the Feature. Thanks for feedback...
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#4
Hello!

I think that the voice used and high percs are too high and should be more "calm" (Reverb, EQ, or something), if I can say that.
The music is pretty repetitive but it's Lo-Fi, so that's good!

Gj anyways bro! ✌
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#5
Yeah... I'm gonna do something Big Grin
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#6
Hows dis fam? <YOUTUBE id="e06vvuIKIB8" url="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e06vvuIKIB8"><URL url="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e06vvuIKIB8">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e06vvuIKIB8</URL></YOUTUBE>
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#7
No problem, dude!
That's just my opinion <EMOJI seq="1f601">?</EMOJI>
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#8
Wow it's really good it's a bit to simple in my opinion but the speech and the transition to the song are really good !
Seem like the life I need's a little distant
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#9
First things first...
YES.

Now on to my actual review of this track. Now, you say, your "trying to make some shit"
My problem with that is that this song is in no way shit, It is amazing. Not just amazing. Its brilliant.
The voice in it really helps tell a story in my head. As if theirs a group of mobsters, or business guys trying to discus something that could change the world, on a rainy day.

The general vibe of the song can be described as pausing for a moment of silence, because this song really does just make me pause, and think about the song, and all its details. It builds so much picture in my head. The little Philosophy said in the song really makes you thing extra hard on what he says. but in a unique way where its like im not thinking about whats being said, but subconsciously realizing more about the world.

Over all, its a good listen, Great job!
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#10
Slyth, it seems like you love Lo-Fi, isn't it? (This track is kinda great, I agree) Big Grin
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#11
I love it when people put vocals like this in to a chill track. Great work dude :mrgreen:
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#12
Yeah, "KINDA" Big Grin

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Death Gun post_id=2931 time=1533420021 user_id=688 Wrote:Slyth, it seems like you love Lo-Fi, isn't it? (This track is kinda great, I agree) Big Grin
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#13
Not just "kinda" :lol:
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Lo-fi is probably one of my top favrite types of music. I could chill for hours listening to it. :lol:
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#15
Yeah, me too... I like some different types like Future Funk and Chill, but LoFi giving me some extra feel of happiness. I don't know why, but I like it Big Grin

Have a nice day Wink

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Slythpaw post_id=3549 time=1533774269 user_id=711 Wrote:Lo-fi is probably one of my top favrite types of music. I could chill for hours listening to it. :lol:
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<QUOTE author="Slythpaw" post_id="3549" time="1533774269" user_id="711">
Slythpaw post_id=3549 time=1533774269 user_id=711 Wrote:Lo-fi is probably one of my top favrite types of music. I could chill for hours listening to it. :lol:
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That's what I thought x)
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#17
Yes, I know Smile
But also I like others genres Big Grin

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Death Gun post_id=3642 time=1533811064 user_id=688 Wrote:<QUOTE author="Slythpaw" post_id="3549" time="1533774269" user_id="711">
Slythpaw post_id=3549 time=1533774269 user_id=711 Wrote:Lo-fi is probably one of my top favrite types of music. I could chill for hours listening to it. :lol:
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That's what I thought x)
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neoNcz post_id=3651 time=1533817444 user_id=318 Wrote:Yes, I know Smile
But also I like others genres Big Grin

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Death Gun post_id=3642 time=1533811064 user_id=688 Wrote:<QUOTE author="Slythpaw" post_id="3549" time="1533774269" user_id="711">
Slythpaw post_id=3549 time=1533774269 user_id=711 Wrote:Lo-fi is probably one of my top favrite types of music. I could chill for hours listening to it. :lol:
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That's what I thought x)
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I don't doubt! Big Grin
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Death Gun post_id=3660 time=1533827705 user_id=688 Wrote:<QUOTE author="neoNcz" post_id="3651" time="1533817444" user_id="318">
neoNcz post_id=3651 time=1533817444 user_id=318 Wrote:Yes, I know Smile
But also I like others genres Big Grin

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Death Gun post_id=3642 time=1533811064 user_id=688 Wrote:<QUOTE author="Slythpaw" post_id="3549" time="1533774269" user_id="711">
Slythpaw post_id=3549 time=1533774269 user_id=711 Wrote:Lo-fi is probably one of my top favrite types of music. I could chill for hours listening to it. :lol:
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That's what I thought x)
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I don't doubt! Big Grin
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OK....
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