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Yghoa - Characters/Introduction
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Hey all, I've been working on an idea for a comic/show for a while, and I really like some of the Characters I've ended up making! Here they are, with Back stories and all :mrgreen:

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This is Yo - Yo. (Female) She was brain-washed. Her oldest memory is waking up in a testing lab, and a yo - yo on the table by her side. She took it, and ran off.

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This is Jay. (Male) He grew up in an abusive family. After he couldn't take anymore, he ran away, and came across a Blacksmith's shop. He decided, Welp, what could go wrong? (A lot)

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This Is Acacia. (Female) She lived in a nice home with a nice family, plenty of friends, but a dark past. She woke up blindfolded one night, in a cold metal room. Somone was with her, and they tore her limb from limb, replacing her body with robotic parts. She's now the freak of the group.



So, what do you think? :mrgreen:

OH, and my "TheRightJelly" Oc is also part of this! I haven't come up with a backstory though.
P.S, you may need to try to zoom in to see details. Sorry, it's really hard to get better results.
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P.S, you may need to try to zoom in to see details. Sorry, it's really hard to get better results.
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OH, and my "TheRightJelly" Oc is also part of this! I haven't come up with a backstory though.
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Starting with Yo-Yo, i will say even though its a little hard to see i can still see the outline of what your trying to make. I like her bandanna. Her story has a good concept, and makes me wonder more about the yoyo :?

Jay over there with his sick sword. The sword is a good sword, which i much like over ridiculous weapons i see in some anime's. I like seeing weapons like Jays sword, where it actually is functional. Blacksmiths are amazing. Used to make blacksmiths all the time. I like this character.

Acacia is very interesting looking. Id like to see a bigger picture of them because their design looks so bazaar and interesting. That backstory to. Good stuff. Very saw sounding.

Good oc's! I like them, they got chemistry!
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Man, can we promote <MENTION>[mention]Slythpaw[/mention]</MENTION> to a "Reviewer" ? Thank you :mrgreen:

Also here's your request for a bigger picture!

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#6
oof its not working :/
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Its cool. I know the picture is still well made in the long run. Congrats on the Beta, btw! :lol:
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What are you taking your pictures with, if you don't mind me asking?
Like Slyth, I'm also left curious about Yo-Yo. Does she use it as a weapon? Plus, anyone who is brainwashed has a backstory to uncover -- that's always fun!
I really am unable to see the details even with zooming in, so I'm sure she looks cool but really I just see an outline.
Jay gives me Link vibes, from Zelda. Abuse is also GREAT (-quote by Gravaged, 2018) for story arcs and character development. It's interesting seeing all these negative traits in a character and really having an understanding of why.
Acacia intrigues me the most, as the gruesome dismemberment really draws me in, as well as the mechanical limb bit.

I would like to see closeups of each character, I zoomed in and didn't get as many details as I would have liked. Maybe it's my old man eyes.
Interesting OCs and backstories though!
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Gravaged post_id=3366 time=1533697301 user_id=583 Wrote:What are you taking your pictures with, if you don't mind me asking?
Like Slyth, I'm also left curious about Yo-Yo. Does she use it as a weapon? Plus, anyone who is brainwashed has a backstory to uncover -- that's always fun!
I really am unable to see the details even with zooming in, so I'm sure she looks cool but really I just see an outline.
Jay gives me Link vibes, from Zelda. Abuse is also GREAT (-quote by Gravaged, 2018) for story arcs and character development. It's interesting seeing all these negative traits in a character and really having an understanding of why.
Acacia intrigues me the most, as the gruesome dismemberment really draws me in, as well as the mechanical limb bit.

I would like to see closeups of each character, I zoomed in and didn't get as many details as I would have liked. Maybe it's my old man eyes.
Interesting OCs and backstories though!
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I'm actually just using my computer - My phone kinda died out on me, sooo.. Yeah, thats a problem. And Yo - Yo actually does use it as a weapon - When needed, she retracts several knife blades out of it, and just chucks it at people :mrgreen: Thank you for the review!
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