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Post by Hactastic » Thu Jan 10, 2019 9:43 pm

I’m not really sure what genre it is for this song, so if ’house’ is completely wrong, then pardon me. I uploaded this to newgrounds the first day of 2019, but I forgot to post it here. The song is quite long, and may be a little bit repetitive. But yeah, hope you like it :)

https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/840786

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Post by DonJorge » Fri Jan 11, 2019 10:22 am

Really good, but it's getting quite too fast so it feels uncomfortable (@ 0:50 and @3:30)
Overall pretty nice to listen to.
Seem like the life I need's a little distant

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Post by Hactastic » Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:20 pm

I totally understand what you mean. But still, thank you! :)
I see that you're giving me feedback on my songs, which is really just awesome. When I get feedback, I learn from my mistakes, and I will do better in the future, so tysm <3

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Post by DonJorge » Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:58 pm

Hactastic wrote:
Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:20 pm
I totally understand what you mean. But still, thank you! :)
I see that you're giving me feedback on my songs, which is really just awesome. When I get feedback, I learn from my mistakes, and I will do better in the future, so tysm <3
Haha you're welcome, btw if you want more feedback you should give people feedback yourself and maybe ask them for feedback under their posts so you get noticed by them like you noticed me haha😁
Seem like the life I need's a little distant

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Post by Death Gun » Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:58 pm

We don't care the genre, we pay attention to the quality! 😎

So, here are my advices :
- The instruments are really cool
- The drop isn't loud enough, I mean, it could be really better (He is cool, but he could be better)
- 0:56, 3:26 : There are volume automation errors, to these times
- 1:06 : There is too much side-chain, to my taste
- The end is useless (Till 5:48)

I hope I could help you anyway, this is a good song idea, nice melody and nice structure, good job! ✌🔥
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Post by Hactastic » Sun Jan 13, 2019 12:32 am

Ty for the feedback. This is the first time I really use side-chain, and I'm not really good with it, but I will learn from my mistakes :)
And yeah, I used alot of automation clips there so I'm not really surprised it screwed up.

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Post by Hactastic » Sun Jan 13, 2019 12:33 am

Haha okay, ty for the tip :D

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Post by Death Gun » Sun Jan 13, 2019 10:59 am

Yeeaaah, That's what I like to hear!
And yes you're gonna learn a lot by doing errors and receiving tips!
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