Bosnia Groove

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Bosnia Groove

Post by SCSoundz » Wed Jul 11, 2018 8:24 pm

This is an unfinished jazzy track I've been working on the past few weeks now. Not really mixed yet. Just looking for some feedback really.

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Re: Bosnia Groove

Post by DonJorge » Wed Jul 11, 2018 8:58 pm

Really nice music and the background picture is really fitting haha
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Re: Bosnia Groove

Post by Jonathaj » Sat Jul 14, 2018 9:17 am

Amazing! I really like the overall groove you're communicating here :)

A little thing I noticed is that the percussion that is intruduced at 0:17 (the shaker)
is way too loud/dominant, so the other instruments doesn't get to shine as much
as they should. Also, the end sounds very "cut off", and I think a large reason for that
is actually the bass drum beat that is the very last hit. I think leaving it at the snare
hit would sound a bit more final.

Other than my nitpicks on the beat/percussion, I think the track is great! :D
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Re: Bosnia Groove

Post by SCSoundz » Sun Jul 15, 2018 6:06 am

Thanks for the feedback guys. I really appreciate it. Ill make some edits and post an update at some point. Still need to mix this thing lol :lol:
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Re: Bosnia Groove

Post by NillsimeN » Mon Jul 16, 2018 10:33 pm

The instrumental itself is very nice, but as the user above pointed, the shaker is louder than necessary, and the beat itself doesn't really stand enough (for my taste). I really like the improvisation on this, it's really my style. I hope you make it to the end with this track!
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