Gaming/dance song

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Gaming/dance song

Post by LL_CALIREP » Thu Jul 12, 2018 4:18 pm

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Post by Jonathaj » Thu Jul 12, 2018 6:29 pm

Nice track!

I especially like the part at 1:27-1:57

If anything, I would suggest more smooth transitioning between the different parts of the song, so that the listener
is guided from one section to the other. Simply adding a riser can go a long way with this effect, but even better is
it if certain instruments or rythms from the next section are introduced a while before the section itself to blend
the whole song into one thing and not just different parts stitched together.

Also, it might just be me, but I feel the song is a little bit too loud at some points.

With all this being said, I really did enjoy listening to this piece, I'm looking forward to your next production. :)
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Post by LL_CALIREP » Fri Jul 13, 2018 9:22 pm

Thanks I appreciate your time.

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Post by TheFrostySoul » Fri Jul 13, 2018 11:04 pm

Something about this song is both really calming and nostalgic, but I don't know what. That kind of stuff takes talent, and you definitely have the talent it takes. Great job on the song, and keep up the good work.
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Post by LL_CALIREP » Sat Jul 14, 2018 2:27 am

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Something about this song is both really calming and nostalgic, but I don't know what. That kind of stuff takes talent, and you definitely have the talent it takes. Great job on the song, and keep up the good work.
Thanks bro! I appreciate your feedback as well for taking the time to listen to my song!!
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Post by DonJorge » Sat Jul 14, 2018 2:36 pm

Don't understand how you get such a low review on NG I'm really getting old Spanish summer dance song vibes from it haha like bailando by loona :D especially the second half
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