Dragon Master Iva -Slythpaw(Intense Orchestral)

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Dragon Master Iva -Slythpaw(Intense Orchestral)

Post by Slythpaw » Fri Nov 02, 2018 3:04 pm



Ayy. New song i made. Well... ive had it for a while, i just never uploaded it.
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Post by VanillaTaurus » Tue Nov 06, 2018 7:03 am

heres my review of "Dragon Master Iva" with 4 negatives & 4 positives
Negatives
1. the vocal choirs on what I'm assuming to be your chorus area are honestly terrible. But then again making that sample sounds good is next to impossible. I'd recommend either replacing it/not using it.
2. There's not really anything super interesting about the instruments used that makes it unique. Just basic drums and other stock sounding instruments
3. There's several points during the track where it seems the instruments aren't really working in unison. It kinda sounds like you just made the drums and then got some FL Loops to throw on top of it
4. The cover art isn't very good tbh, you're a really talented drawer but the way it's edited just ruins it. Especially with the lighting

positives
1. I kinda dig the overall vibe I get from the song, reminds me of something from the original DOOM during it's highlights.
2. I like the subtle synth saws used during the track from time to time. Really helps flesh out the track and give it some texture.
3. The drumming is pretty well done. It's a bit echoey but overall, not too shabby.
4. The area around 0:50 or so is probably my favorite part. Everything just comes together so well during this and that whole DOOM vibe is at it's vibe.
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Post by Slythpaw » Tue Nov 06, 2018 4:18 pm

Ay, thanks for the review! :lol:
Ya, the vocal chorus was a weird piano i found in the software i use. If i tried doing actual singing of any kind it would sound awkward, off key, and generally bad.
This song is not something im super proud of, i just made it on my free time about 2 years ago and never released it.
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